It's a pacing nightmare, let's be real. Authors often solve it by splitting the narrative focus. You follow the POV of the general for the grand strategy and the foot soldier or scout for the personal, ground-level horror and growth. This way, the 'massive war' is given its due scale through one lens, while the intimate cost and change are shown through another. Brandon Sanderson does this effectively in 'The Stormlight Archive'—you have Dalinar's tactical and political burdens, but also Kaladin's journey from slave to leader, which is deeply personal and happens amidst the chaos. The war provides the stakes, but the close-in POVs make you care about who pays them.
I think adaptations (TV, film, games) struggle with this more than books. They have limited time, so the temptation is to focus on the spectacle—the big battles with CGI armies. Character moments get shortened to a few lines of dialogue between action set pieces. The balance is lost. A novel can spend pages inside a character's head during a march; a movie has to show the march visually, often skipping the internal monologue. The best adaptations find visual or silent ways to show growth during the action—a meaningful glance, a changed fighting style, a hesitant decision. But it's a tougher trick to pull off.
First-person vs. multiple POV. A single first-person narrative will always be skewed toward that character's internal experience; the war is filtered through their limited understanding and bias. This automatically emphasizes character growth. A sprawling third-person multi-POV epic can show the war from many angles—generals, soldiers, spies, civilians—creating a vast tapestry. Character growth is then distributed across the ensemble. Neither is inherently better at balancing; they just achieve it differently. The first-person makes the war personal. The multi-POV makes the personal aspects collective, showing how the conflict changes an entire society of characters.
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Rena had never imagined how in only a few years, everything could change. Dealing with horrific heartache at the hands of the human prince, Blaine; and knowing that the whole of the Seven Realms were so very close to the start of a war. Prince Dorian had cut all ties and peace treaties from the other Six Realms. Rena's own father, the king of the Elven Realm, had drastically changed how he ruled his kingdom all because of a new advisor who was as mysterious as he was evil and cunning.
Rena only hoped that maybe her older siblings would be able to find love and happiness in whatever romance the Fates had planned for them. Her own love had been destroyed, but how could the Fates be so cruel? What other plans did the Seven have for an Elven princess who still often pined for a human prince when he had cast her aside so easily? And would this Elven princess ever know truly, how much her human prince pined after his lost princess? Could they help their kingdoms stave off a war that could destroy everything?
He was a warrior. He was meant to protect the King and the Kingdom. His name brought the fear for life in warriors across the world. What he never thought he would become was the High King of two Emperors. Their Warrior, Their Saviour, Their Partner, Their Husband. He became all of it.
“I thought you wanted to sleep, my Queen,” Lorcan whispered.
“I changed my mind,” Niamh kissed Lorcan again, deeply, hungrily. “Besides, you owe me a
wedding night.”
“I stand reminded,” Lorcan bowed his head. Looking up, he grasped Niamh around the waist and turned to lay her beneath him, kissing her passionately.
***
Niamh had dutifully fulfilled her obligation to marry King Lorcan of the Elven Realms, only to
watch her new husband ride off to battle the very next day.
But he was lost in battle, and she was left to face her new role as Queen among haters, admirers, and potential suitors… and a traitor.
Despite the challenges she formed new alliances, treaties, and friends, and, once the King was found, they built an unshakable love while facing turmoil.
Once free to leave, what choice will she make? Will the love they formed be strong
enough to endure more than time?
Rising Storm in the Elven Realms is created by Heather Dilts-Baiano, an eGlobal Creative
Publishing signed author.
Aurora, a strong-willed and compassionate princess, is next in line to inherit the throne of the mystical kingdom of Eldrador.
However, her parents' sudden passing leaves her with a daunting task: choosing a suitable partner to rule alongside her.
According to ancient tradition, the queen must select a group of four noble suitors each representing a different element (earth, water, spirit and the sword which slays), to form a sacred bond and ensure the kingdom's prosperity.
Aurora is torn between her duty and her desire for true love. As she navigates the complexities of court politics and magic she finds herself drawn to each of the four suitors, each with their unique personalities and abilities.
But she has a childhood crush that she cannot move on from, a shadow walker and highly ranked ninja, Kael StarSeekera who would appear later to defy all that she knows and believes.
In the shattered remains of Lupis Imperium, Prince Kael Stormfang and Selene Dawnveil, an Omega bound by a forbidden Soul-Oath, must navigate betrayal, war, and a crumbling empire. After an explosive uprising orchestrated by his trusted mentor, Cyrus Viper Thornwell, Kael is forced to confront not just the forces threatening his throne, but the lies that have been woven into the very fabric of his past.
Bound together by a powerful and dangerous connection, Kael and Selene are the empire’s last hope. Yet, their bond is not just a source of strength, but of torment, as the secrets of their past threaten to tear them apart. Betrayed by those they once trusted, the two must work together to uncover the conspiracy that has shattered their world and led them to the brink of collapse.
As war rages and forces of darkness grow ever more powerful, Kael and Selene must confront the truth about their loyalty, their love, and their shared fate. Together, they will rebuild the empire—but can they survive the cost of doing so?
Physical decay as a counterpart to spiritual growth. The young, agile hero of book one gains wisdom and power but loses their health, speed, or beauty. Their growth is a negotiation with their own aging body, learning to rely on mind over muscle. This poignant contrast—the spirit strengthening as the flesh weakens—is a deeply moving arc that requires a long timeline to feel authentic.
It's all about the callbacks. A character learns a hard lesson in book two, fails to apply it in book four, and then, in a moment of crisis in book seven, that lesson finally clicks. Seeing them use an old skill with new wisdom, or revisit a place that held trauma and see it with different eyes—that's the payoff. It tells the reader the journey mattered, that the character is truly different from who they were on page one. Without those subtle callbacks, growth feels theoretical.
Honestly, I think some authors rely too much on trauma as a catalyst for change. It gets repetitive: tragedy happens, character gets sad/angry, they train or seek revenge, repeat. The most satisfying long-term growth for me comes from education and mentorship. A character slowly acquiring knowledge, wisdom, and perspective over years of travel and study, changing their worldview not through pain alone but through understanding. That feels more realistic and rewarding than another orphaned farmboy discovering latent power.
Fatigue. Not just physical, but emotional and narrative fatigue. After a certain point, no matter how well-written, a battle can overstay its welcome. The best authors seem to have an instinct for when the reader's capacity for violence is saturated. They'll break away to a quiet moment elsewhere, or transition into the aftermath. Pushing past that saturation point turns excitement into drudgery.