I find series thrillers often handle this better. The first book might be more plot-heavy to hook you, but by the second or third, you're deeply invested in the recurring protagonist. You already know their core, so the author can spend less time establishing and more time putting them under new, twisted pressures that challenge their established self.
The pace can remain high because the foundational depth is already built. The twists can be more nuanced, playing off the reader's existing knowledge of the character. It's a long-game approach to the balance, but a very effective one.
The 'ticking clock' has been mentioned, but what about a 'shrinking space'? Physical confinement can create incredible pace—nowhere to run, pressure increasing. In that confined space, characters are forced to interact, to confess, to confront each other.
Their true selves are revealed under the stress of proximity and imminent doom. The depth comes from these raw, unfiltered interactions. A twist might be a hidden weapon, a secret alliance, or a betrayal within the confined group. The setting forces both relentless pace and intense character revelation.
Atmospheric detail is a shortcut that works wonders. Instead of a paragraph about a character's loneliness, show the empty coffee cups lining their desk as they work through the night on the case. The plot doesn't stop—they're still working—but the environment tells a story about their obsession and isolation.
The pace continues because the action (researching, connecting dots) is happening. The depth accrues through these visual, sensory hints. A later twist that isolates them further feels inevitable because the environment has been quietly showing their trajectory toward solitude all along.
My two cents: it's about making the character's goal deeply personal. If the plot is just about stopping a generic terrorist, who cares? But if it's about a former spy whose daughter is the hostage, and every twist involves a betrayal from his old life, the depth is built-in. The twists test his loyalties, his skills, his love.
The pace stays high because the personal stake means there's no time to waste. Every setback is emotionally devastating, not just a tactical delay. The character's depth—his history as a spy, his role as a father—is the fuel for the entire plot engine.
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Dialogue is your best friend. Long descriptions? Murder them. Keep sentences jagged, scenes short, and revelations explosive. Study screenwriting techniques—thrillers thrive on visual pacing. And for god’s sake, avoid backstory dumps. Let the past bleed in through cracks, like in 'Sharp Objects,' where every memory feels like a shard of glass. If your outline doesn’t give you an adrenaline rush, scrap it and start again. The genre rewards ruthlessness.