Gnlmb#1 の小説・ストーリー

Still coming along nicely. The Archie plot has hot a good point. I feel there is more to come with Rain in the story and I like that. It is good to acknowledge the news spread of his accomplishments beating down Archie, but I would shorten the side conversations of the random people.

I'm honestly surprised that this story doesn't have more views and reviews. It's well-written, moves at a relaxing pace and the author did an amazing job with the descriptions. The characters has great depth, personalities that stand out. It is also clean and well-edited.

All I can say is bravo, I absolutely love your writing. Everything I have read from you has kept me intrigue for more. I am definitely looking forward to reading anything you write, it takes alot of talent and imagination to keep so many characters interesting and keep people like me coming back.......

This was the first book I have read that you wrote. Then I started from the beginning and here I am again. Your writing is captivating and I thoroughly enjoy every moment!!!! In the arms of my Alpha is my favourite, but all the others are right up there, as close as the members of a pack! Thanks!

It baffles me how few readers act so bi**chy for no reason.. no one forced you to read this book... so obv u can leave gladly... when the story was published, author beforehand warned that the updates will be once a week and this book is a slow pace one bt still there are hell bent on blaming author

1/2 writer just requesting you to show him grovelling on his feet. Make him feel the pain to such an extent that i start to pity him for his suffering. iski saari akar nikal jaye. make him beg, plead and let him taste karma. Make their child be a daughter which makes him realize the vulnerability of