The Temporary Husband
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he affirms,
“Your world building has always been top notch, story telling, best seller, and your drawings, they’ve always been epic. Your characters have always had clear goals, but that’s all they were, characters.”
Huh?
What did that mean? I have always been open to feedback, and I’ve taken the ones he’s given, even if they seemed stupid sometimes, he ended up right.
This one, I haven’t heard before.
“What does that mean?”
“Your characters, take Bocco for example, his goal was to save his sister, and he grew during the journey, ended up saving the world, and his sister. But, he didn’t seem to have any feelings towards the one person he set out to save.”